Allright everyone, here it is.

[MRIman]

Looks good,clean it up as others posted.
Then send it to a few people in DC to help the fight on
our rights.
Once the SC makes a ruling on the DC case,it will effect the
rest of the country,good or bad,it will effect it!!!!

Nice job,keep up the good work.

MRI

 

[dredwinggirl13]

Seeker...

Appears you might be a recent convert

Its not so much that I was anti before my b/f came along, its just a subject I never gave much thought about untill I was involved with someone who was so into it. After hearing the reasons people own and carry guns, and the statistics of gun control failing miserably, it just doesn't make any sense not to have firearms.

 

[nplant]

dredwinggirl13 -

That's some fine writing. I won't get into all the ways that it could be more perfectly correct grammatically, because heck, it's gotta have your style, but there's a word missing in this paragraph:

Our founding fathers knew what they were doing when they created the Bill of Rights to our Constitution.

 

[ArfinGreebly]

Closing This One. See New Thread

Since she has posted her revisions to a new thread, I'll be closing this one.

Please see this thread for the new stuff.