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PREPARED FOR: XXXXXXXXXXXX 2/4/2006
AUTHORIZED: XXXXXXXXX

Dr. Olivia Silvers
Clinical Psychologist
Psychological Warfare Division
XXXXXXXXXX

SUBJECT: XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
KNOWN ALIASES: Valentine, Michael; Hopper, Michael, Golstein, Emmanuel; Hale, Parker

DESCRIPTION: Adult Male/ Caucasian/ H:6'2"/ W: 212/ Hair: Brown/ Eyes: Blue/Green (Different Colors)/ Age: 24

IDENTIFYING FEATURES: Wears corrective eyewear/ horizontal scar above right eye, 3" long/ vertical scar on left cheek, 2.5" long/ two scars from apparent gunshot wounds on abdomen/ scar on right forearm 4" long/ tattoo on left shoulder (skull image clutching switchblade knife in its teeth)/ tattoo on back of right shoulder (grim reaper/number six (DEAD SIX logo))



PREFACE: Subject was apprehended in XXXXXXXX, Virginia on XX/XX/2005. Surrendered without incident.

On XX/XX/2004, subject was recruited for Project Heartbreaker. Subject was subsequently deployed to XXXXXXXXXXXXX, and was involved in lesser operations in XXXXXXXXXXX and XXXXXXXXX.

Subject has a long history of violence. At a young age (approx. 17) subject somehow became involved with the mercenary group SWITCHBLADE. According to information extracted under chemical coercion, subject eventually took command of SWITCHBLADE before said group dissolved. SWITCHBLADE was the subject of a special Federal task force circa 2000-2002. This operation failed and no arrests were made.

At some point in 2003, subject became involved with terrorist group EXODUS. Was involved in the Des Moines Incident on XX/XX/2003.

Shortly thereafter, subject was approached by XXXXXXXXXXXXX. Induction into Project Heartbreaker/DEAD SIX followed. Subject was deployed to XXXXXXXXXXX on XX/XX/2004.

RESULTS: Subject has been subjected to various types of information extraction, ranging from chemical means to physical coercion. While subject has proven somewhat resiliant to the latter, the former has proven most effective. The most notable information is presented below.

-We now believe that Gordon Willis (ID XXXXXXXXXXXX) did in actuality take his own life, though subject had every intention to kill him.

-We now believe that other operatives of DEAD SIX escaped XXXXXXXXXXXXX, but their whereabouts are unknown. Threat assessment is minimal.

-Subject knows nothing about XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX.

-Subject is responsible for the massive information leak that has of late put the operation into jeapordy. This information was apparently given to him by XXXXXXXXXXXXX (aka "Big Boss") and was subsequently released onto the net.

ASSESSMENT: This subject is easily one of my most interesting cases. He remains defiant and threatening, though I believe most of this is simple bravado and that his will to resist is beginning to fail. He has come to understand that he has no hope of escape and that cooperation is in his best interest.

The subject is a veritable test case of Post Traumatic Stress Disorder. Subject suffers from nightmares and flashbacks, as well as bouts of depression and paranoia. Three incidents seem to provide most of the basis for this:

-The death of his mother;
-The death of the individual called "Sarah" (DEAD SIX/ID: XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX)
-The destruction of the yacht belonging to Anatoly Ivanovich Federov (ref: 143038953/2002), and the subsequent loss of life, for which subject was directly responsible.

ANALYSIS: The subject is a fascinating psychological case for a variety of reasons. At the outset, it seems curious how such a young man with no military training could be such an efficient killer. While it is apparent that he received excellent training while a member of SWITCHBLADE, the apparent basis for his skill is more complex.

The subject himself refers to it only as [I]the calm[/I]. It is interesting enough that he's aware of this condition; yet far from being merely aware of it, the subject has capitalized on it, even depends on it.

The condition referred to is, was, I believe, originally a psychological defensive mechanism triggered by the death of his mother. However as the subject progressed and matured, the condition evolved as well. The condition arises with the onset of adrenaline, and results in a marked change in the subject's behavior.

The primary symptom is described by the subject as a feeling of detachment. "Like playing a computer game," to use the subject's own words. While the subject remains aware of the possibility of his own death and the consequences of his actions, he is able to examine these things on the basis of logic. One could say that the subject's survival instinct simply gets turned off.

This is both an advantage and a disadvantage to the subject; subject admits to taking extreme risks in order to accomplish objectives, with little thought given to his own safety. It has been repeatedly demonstrated that the onset of the condition increases the subject's pain tolerance by almost 100%.

Perhaps the most interesting aspect of this condition is how it relates to the subject's combat efficiency. In short, said efficiency goes up approximately 60% at the onset of the condition. Subject is able to shoot more accurately, make decisions with less hesitation, and absorb and interpret relevant data demonstratably faster.

My colleagues and I are debating whether this may in fact be a type of dissociative identity disorder, wherin the subject is still aware of what's taking place but submits control to the other personality. I personally do not believe this to be the case, but there are some indications.

RECOMMENDATIONS: Subject is both violent and, at times, unstable. He has been a constant security risk for all involved in this analysis. On XX/XX/2005 subject managed to assault and incapacitate XXXXXXXXXXXXXX, one of the individuals responsible for security during my examinations, before being subdued. The fact that I had instructed all such personnel to leave their firearms before entering the examination room is likely the only reason all of us weren't killed. Subject was subdued with tasers and drugs.

More recently, on XX/XX/2006 subject stabbed XXXXXXXXXXXX in the kneecap with a pen, which required treatment at the infimary. Subject continues threatening, harrassing, and defiant behavior. He has repeatedly threatned myself and my staff, and is excellent at antagonizing his security detail. He must be kept under constant watch, as I believe he is an escape risk.

While the subject has made for a fascinating case, I do not believe he is of any further use to the operation. I do believe that if he escapes or is allowed to leave, he will pose a significant security risk to the operation. He has already demonstrated his ability to [I]complicate[/I] things for us.

While I request that he remain under my supervision for further study, the best interests of the operation dictate that he should be liquidated at the discretion of higher authority.

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That's super rough draft off-the-top-of-me-noggin stuff and may not be in the sequel in any form. Also, I'm not a psychologist, so none of that probably sounds correct to someone who actually knows what he's talking about.

Thank you everyone for your patience. Progress on the prequel continues, and right now it's at about about sixteen thousand words. After it's completed, Correia and I will work on the re-write of the Welcome Back story.

When it's finished, I'll mail it out to everyone who PM'd me with an email address. It'll be worth the wait, I promise. Thank you again for the support!

G'night!
 
[TINNY LOUDSPEAKER VOICE]
cough, cough, (blowing sound) with a high pitched mike squeeeeeelllllllll, ok it works

(clears throat)



Good Morning Folks,
Welcome to Nightcrawlers Wild Ride,
coming up we will have explosions, heavy gunfire,
knifings, general mayhem a little loving and what have you.
So tighten the seat belt on your Office chair,
bolt down your monitor, tuck your mouse in your shirt pocket
and hang on to the keyboard,


Cause WE ARE GOING FOR A RIDE

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Soundtrack

Crossroad Blues - Robert Johnson

Makes sense to me for Robert Johnson, to be in the beginnings of this up and coming work.

http://www.netspace.org/users/rjohnson/

Robert Johnson went down to the crossroad...
...where they say he struck a deal with the Devil. Fellow bluesman Tommy Johnson (no relation) said, "If you want to learn how to play anything you want to play and learn how to make songs yourself, you take your guitar and you go to where a road crosses that way, where a crossroad is. Get there, be sure to get there just a little 'fore 12:00 that night so you'll know you'll be there. You have your guitar and be playing a piece there by yourself.... A big black man will walk up there and take your guitar, and he'll tune it. And then he'll play a piece and hand it back to you. That's the way I learned to play anything I want."
 
Oh, what the hell...

This is a pretty pivotal chapter, but it happens early enough in the prequel that I'm not giving much away. It's a flashback, circa 2002.


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“You son of a bitch!” I yelled. Decker looked as collected as ever. “We killed all those people!”

“Hopper, you need to calm down,” he replied coolly. “It’s too bad all those people got caught in the crossfire, but these things happen. Collateral damage that can’t be avoided.”

“It wasn’t a ****ing crossfire!” Triana almost screamed. “You blew them up! Hopper, why did you fire? What the **** were you thinking?”

“I couldn’t see the ****ing boat from my position!”

“A real good story, Hopper, a real…” I cut her off.

“Shut the **** up, Tri!” I turned back to Decker. “We could’ve waited until the party ended! The yacht wasn’t going anywhere! Jesus Christ, we could’ve waited. We didn’t have to kill all those people!”

“You think they were all innocent?” Decker replied coldly. “No one that associates with Federov is innocent, you naïve child! We couldn’t risk him getting away! That yacht could’ve pulled up anchor at any time, and Christ only knows when we’d get another chance! For the money we’re being paid for this one, we can’t afford to be sentimental and **** it up!”

I looked around. Triana was silent, but looked like she’d shoot me dead at any time. Corwin looked shocked, and was staring at Decker. Hawk was off to one side, quietly smoking one of his cigars and leaning on his cane. Decker was staring at me. It was tense.

“Listen to me, Hopper,” Decker continued. “We can work this out later. We need to go now, okay?” I looked around. He was right. We had to get going. The Havana Police were already arriving at the docks below us, and the military would have the city locked down in a few hours.

“I’m not going anywhere with you!” Triana screamed again. She’d been increasingly dissatisfied with our work for weeks now. I guessed that the yacht had been the last straw.

“I’ve had enough,” Decker said, and drew his USP 9mm from its holster. “I will not tolerate insubordination. We’re getting out of here now. Triana, when we get back, you’re done. Hopper, one more word out of you and you’re done too, is that clear?”

“Hey, I…” Triana started to speak again, but froze when Decker pointed his pistol at her and thumbed the hammer back.

“I’m not going to warn you again, Tri-“ He halted when he realized that Corwin had drawn his Beretta and was pointing it at him. Everything happened so fast then, but seemed to happen in slow motion. I realized that Corwin’s pistol still had the safety on. As Decker turned to level his gun at Corwin, I began to draw my Colt .45. Corwin then realized that his safety was on and began to thumb it off.

Decker was on him before he could fire. His shot went low, the bullet plunging into Corwin’s abdomen. Corwin grimaced and stumbled back as a blood began to stream out of the wound.

“DECKER!” I screamed. He froze and looked at me. I held my pistol out, sights aligned, and shot him through the heart. He stumbled back, dropped his pistol, and collapsed to the ground.

“Triana, help Corwin. TRIANA!” She looked at me then. She was slipping into shock. “Help Corwin!” I repeated. I didn’t lower my pistol. I looked over at Hawk. He was a fast draw, but I already had my pistol out and the safety off. This man had taught me how to shoot. He’d been my mentor. But as I looked at him then, I think he knew that I wouldn’t hesitate to kill him if he threatened my friends as Decker had. The split second seemed to last an eternity, but Hawk merely nodded at me and continued to puff on his cigar.

Without holstering my pistol, I walked over to Corwin. He was laying on the pavement, cursing and swearing as Triana dressed his wound. She looked at me wide-eyed when I approached, but continued bandaging.

“God damn it, Matthew,” I said, using his given name for the first time in ages. “You gonna be alright?” He managed half a grin and told me he needed a cigarette. I grinned back at him, and stood up again. Triana watched me, fire in her eyes, as I walked over to Decker.

Decker’s wound had caused a large puddle of blood to pool around him, and he would be dead soon. I looked down at him.

“Collateral damage,” I said, so quietly that no one else could hear, and leveled my pistol at his face.

“G…go on, boy,” he managed, sounding weak, blood gurgling in his throat. “Finish it.” His gaze was intense. My blood ran cold.

“My mother is dead because of you,” I said. Triana jumped at the noise as my pistol barked. It suddenly seemed very quiet; I could hear the brass case hit the pavement as clear as day. Triana’s face was white, anger burned in her dark eyes. Corwin had lost blood and was going into shock. Hawk seemed as calm as ever. Personally, I felt detached and cold, as if ice water were flowing through my veins. I grabbed the radio microphone clipped to my harness and spoke.

“Attention all SWITCHBLADE elements. This is Hopper. Decker is dead. I’m taking command…radio check.”
 
Maybe later on. I don't want to give the whole prequel away in sneak peeks! I just want to assure everybody that I'm not sitting on my duff. I'm going to try to get two more chapters cranked out this weekend.

Note the much higher level of polish than in my ad-hoc online writing.

SM should be along with a soundtrack suggestion shortly. I look forward to that. :cool:
 
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