Bit Me: A story of the end of the world

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The dream was very believable. Realistic with just enough surreal to it. The
interaction with the people in the dream was not questioned by the dreamer.
A fine touch to the story especially the...

He spun reaching for a gun that wasn’t there.

Most everyone here has had that dream or the can't shoot, bullets fall out, something wrong, or just falls apart.

hpgrisso, interesting choice in screen name.... I take it you are here for the story. :cool:

Welcome and be sure to look around at our other offerings.
 
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Thanks Working Man...

I have a special connection with our author, hrgrisso ;) And I am enjoying the story as well as everyone's comments to his story.
 
Just then Gabe woke up and saw that his wife was watching the morning news on the television while enjoying a cup of coffee. "Damn", he said, "that is the last time that I have pizza before bedtime..."
 
Next installment?

G'day everyone,.....

Well after days of sweating and straining,.......
I come back to a great slice of my story's!!

I am eagerly awaiting the next installment,....

I'd love to hear how the rescue of his brother go's before thay leg it to the Palace.

Ps: look at that,..post no: .308 what a great calliber!!

Aussie.
 
I LOVE it!

hrgrisso. I just found your story tonight and I totally love it! I'm only up to post #100 back at the end of page 4 but had to jump up here and make this post so I could snag the thread in my CP. Will tune back in tomorrow night. You know mister, you're one darn fine writer. :)
 
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Caimias said:
Werewolves are the answer to this riddle. These zombie predators are werezombies.

It's a strain of virus which kills/zombifies the majority of its infectees. However, for those within the O-type blood group who are the descendants of Black Plague survivors, there is a special immunity against the zombification. This same immunity also makes this group (as well as everyone else with different blood types) immune to AIDS, the plague, and various other strains of immune system attacking viruses. However, in the case of this particular virus, the inborn properties of the immune O-types is uniquely coded, allowing for the virus to bond with the DNA symbioticly. The result is a breed which is superior in intellect and physical attributes to both the zombified humans and uninfected humans. It is unhindered by the genetic-dead-end properties of the zombie rot while retaining human reasoning, but also has the cold, animalistic predatory instinct of the zombies. Of course, being a further evolution of both the zombie and the human and having predatory instincts means this creature will seek out and kill all such competitors.

Hey Caimias, I'm an O-type... does this apply to both the O-positive and the O-negative types?

"...the inborn properties of the immune O-types is uniquely coded, allowing for the virus to bond with the DNA symbioticly. The result is a breed which is superior in intellect and physical attributes to both the zombified humans and uninfected humans."

Oh boy oh boy, I just can't wait to get bitten! :neener:
 
Chapter 6:Continued

The sun was setting. No helicopters had returned. Gabe moved from his bedroom to the living room. Seamus was asleep on the couch. “Cmon brother. Time to go.” Gabe reached out and touched his brothers shoulder, Seamus stirred.

“Cmon shame, get your guns loaded. We’ve gotta get rolling.”

Rubbing the sleep from his eyes Seamus shook his head trying to wake up, and nodded affirmative. Standing he walked into the kitchen. There he picked up one of the M-4’s that the soldiers had been using earlier in the day, short barrel, collapsible stock, full auto rockin switch. Seamus picked up a magazine from the table and slammed it home.

Grinning Gabe tossed him a heavy canvas bag. “Load a bunch of mags and hold them in there. Be sure to load some for your pistol to.” Gabe said motioning to the gun Seamus had never taken off his hip.

While Seamus moved to load his ammo Gabe walked back to his bedroom. Grateful to be preparing to go, heavy hearted to leave.
Safe inside his room he limped to his dresser and started going through drawers looking for what he needed. Once he found it Gabe buckled a light leather belt around his waist to hold up his kilt. On top of that he buckled his larger gun belt, thick, old beaten and tough. Before he sinched it tight he pulled the holster and mag holders on. He looked across the room at JJ and smiled. She had tears in her eyes, he knew she didn’t want him to leave. He knew he had to. He pulled on his socks then pulled his boots on. He adjusted them then tightened his laces till he could feel the pressure inside on his feet.

He picked up his big Sig, the 226, checked the chamber and the magazine and pushed it into his holster. He cracked open a new box of ammo and started loading his extra magazines, two twenty rounders, and five fifteen rounders. Two boxes of ammo later he was fully loaded. He put the two twenties on his waist, and the five fifteen rounders in his day bag. A maxpedition versipack, even with all that, a flashlight, extra batteries and a large bowie knife and a concussion grenade they’d claimed earlier, but he wasn’t done yet.

Gabe shuffled into his closet and knelt down beneath the clothes and shoes. He started moving boxes, pushing them aside till he’d reached what he was looking for. A long grey metal case had been hidden beneath all the stuff that hid in closets.

He slid the rollers on the side till the combination was dialed in. He clicked the tabs on the edge and they popped open. Inside lay a parkerized tool, that just oozed danger. Gabe reached out and lovingly picked up his Galil, he’d had it worked over by a gunsmith and was his baby. He liked the Benelli but loved the Galil.

Picking it up he pulled back the charging handle checking the chamber, and walked out to his bed. “Hold this for me?”

JJ nodded and reached out, careful to hold the forearm and the stock.

Gabe walked back to the closet and moved the case for the rifle. Beneath it he pulled out several huge boxes of ammo which he moved out to the bedroom. 5.56x45 Hornady Tap. He pulled out his pocket knife, the same knife he’d dropped in the bathroom the day this had all started, and cut open one of the boxes. Once they were open he started loading up the magazines for the rifle.

One magazine. Two magazines. Three magazines. Four magazines. Five magazines. Six magazines and on. Gabe kept pushing the ammunition in one round at a time. Occasionally he’d stop loading to rub his finger tips. After filling each magazine to capacity he stood the magazine on end in the large compartment of his pack. When he loaded his thirteenth and last magazine he slide that one into the gun itself. He stood and slung the bag from his shoulders. It was comfortable hanging next to his waist without pulling on his belts. It hung at an almost perfect length to be readily accessible when he’d need a reload. Gabe had a feeling he’d need a few of those.
Stepping next to his wife he dug into the bottom drawer of his nightstand and pulled out a beautiful cherry wood box, shallow, long and wide. He clicked the buttons and the lock on one side clicked open. He offered the box to JJ who silently put her half of the combination in. With a loud click the box opened slightly.

JJ lifted the lid. It had been a while since they’d seen these. Inside the box, on top of black velvet lay two matching 4” Colt Pythons, beautifully finished in a silvery chemical treatment called NP3. They’d given them to each other on their first Christmas together.

Smiling Gabe picked up on, remembering the heft and balance. Pulling the hammer back, feeling the action. Quietly he slide the barrel of his inside a hidden compartment in his bag. JJ rummaged inside the drawer of the nightstand till she came up with a nice leather belt holster. She stood, picked up her revolver and placed it in the holster. Holding gun and leather in one hand she wrapped her arms around her husband. “You’d better come home!”

No threats were needed. Nothing else was said.

From the living room “Dave’s back!”

After several moments Gabe slipped from his wife’s embrace, kissed her lips, feeling the warmth of them. And he turned and limped to the door. Holding the doorknob he straightend up, and left the room.

JJ slipped the holster inside her waistband of her pants, comfortable like an old friend. She saw in her mind her husband leave the room. And a tear slid down her cheek. Angrily she wiped it away and started gathering the boxes of ammo, they’d need a lot of it if they were going to have the fight she was afraid of.
 
Chapter 6:Continued

Gabe marched into the living room. Seamus nodded, his pack bulged with loaded magazines. Deacon and Dave were there as well. Gabe nodded to them both. “There’s more ammo in the bedroom, I just opened a new case.”

Dave nodded and tossed him a set of keys. “I found one I thought would meet your needs. It’s a double cab Tundra, 4x4. Those new ones are damn heavy but I think it’ll get you there.”

“What took you so long?” Gabe asked.

“Took forever to find the dealership gas pumps.” Dave said.

Gabe nodded. Seamus and Deacon started grinning like idiots. “What am I missing?”

“Well I figured you all come running tommorow that we may need to head out in a hurry…” Dave paused. “Maybe I better just show you.” With that he headed for the door. Deacon laughed and fell in behind him. Seamus motioned for Gabe to follow.

The women and kids were starting to come out from the back bedrooms as the men headed outside.

Deacon held the door for Gabe, who stepped outside, more than a little confused. Right outside his door was a massive Ford truck. All around the outside of the condo were large trucks and SUV’s from the complex. They formed a protective ring around the buildings walls weaked after two gun battles. Outside the large vehicles were a slightly smaller ring of vehicles and outside that a ring of cars. Impenetrable fortress indeed. Gabe had a hard enough time getting out through the cars. Deacon had done a great job! This might last against bugs or the military.

By the time he made it outside Gabe felt squished from having to squeeze between all the cars. But parked outside the protective barrier was Dave’s surprise. Four trucks were parked parralel to each other. Identical except for color, Dave had rounded up five large 4x4’s.

“I figured that if you all come running tomorrow that we all should be ready and we should have vehicles capable of running in!” Dave said. “This way we can be packed up before you get here, loaded up and when you get here, we all head out, caravan style.”

Gabe nodded. Dumbstruck. He’d just figured they’d all take their own vehicles. He’d never stopped to think that some of them were driving cars, fast, but hardly suited to running fully loaded with passengers and gear on rough roads, or worse, no roads at all.

When Gabe didn’t respond Dave continued, “they are all full power, gased up and should do 300 miles at least on a tank. That should get us there… Right?”

Gabe nodded. “I don’t think you should leave them parked here. Let’s run them around behind B Building.” He said pointing to the building across the way. “The bugs attacked head on, and I figure the helicopter pilots passed on, exactly what building we’re in, not that the fencing and bullet holes aren’t a dead give away.” A smile slowly spread across his face.

“So you all are packing tonight?” He asked.
 
Chapter 6:Continued

“Give us three hours Bubba, be packed. We’ve gotta plan on stationary vehicles. Any luck we’ll be there in two.” Gabe said.

The ham radio crackled, “Will do little brother.”

“Ok everybody, guns and ammo take priority, followed by clothes, even if it’s old, or dirty, or doesn’t fit you, maybe somebody else, maybe some day. Food is good, we’ve got a lot up north but more never hurt. Any other gear that we might need, ask Dave or JJ.”

Gabe stared out at his people. Most people when emotional will claim they’d give their life for many other people. For Gabe the list of people had gotten smaller since the outbreak. But even before the outbreak, this was most of them. If he’d ever had any doubt it was gone now.

“God speed, we’ll be back before sunrise. Be ready to go. I want to be north of the city by sun up and well clear of most the military patrols. Any luck we’ll be at the palace in time to sleep well tomorrow night.”

Seamus gave his wife and kids a hug and a kiss.
Since he’d brought him home, Winston was always at his heels. Gabe bent down and scratched his head. “Winston take good care of my girls!”

Winston woofed again.

Readjusting his rifle to his back, Gabe picked up each of his daughters and held them tight. He held them long enough to feel their heartbeat, then put them down with a quick peck on the cheek.

“Ow daddy! Your beard is scratchy!” They both squealed.

“That’s so I only kiss people I care about!” Gabe said.

They giggled.

He walked over to his wife and again wrapped her in his burly arms.

“Hows your foot babe?” she asked.

“As good as it’s going to get. I wrapped it.” He said.

“No heroics? Just get back?” she asked.

“Of course!” he said.

With that he pulled away, kissed her forehead and hurried to the trucks. “Let’s move them!”

Each of the four mobile men jumped into four of the trucks and drove them around behind the nearest buildings. They quickly walked back to their families who had retreated inside the buildings and line of cars, rifles at the ready.

Gabe climbed up the last truck into the drivers seat. Seamus jumped in beside him. “Dave take care of everyone.”

Dave nodded.

“Deacon I don’t think you should spend any more time in the balcony. With all these cars and trucks out here their almost a ramp for either biters or bugs to come eat you.”

Deacon nodded.

“Don’t be afraid to use the grenades!” Gabe said.

“Just get out of here! We’ll be fine till you get back!” Dave shouted.

Taking one last look around Gabe sat down in the drivers seat and started the truck, pulled the gearshift into drive and gave it some gas. They were on their way!”

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“We taking the freeway?” Seamus asked.

“Not yet.” Gabe replied. “We’ve gotta get out of the city first. I’m afraid the freeway will be watched, and will be to congested.”

Seamus nodded.

“That’s the great thing about Phoenix. Golf courses all over!” Gabe said as he held up his GPS. “I don’t know how much longer these things will work, but for now… I’ve got bubba’s house programmed in.”

Just pulling onto the street Gabe took a deep breath. There were cars wrecked and burnt all around. Some cars in all four lanes, some on the sidewalks.

Gabe took it easy and weaved through old accidents, around them left and right. A few bodies were left strewn around. Gabe tried not to look, but it didn’t take a close inspection to see they were rotted and bloated. The Arizona heat didn’t do much for carcasses or corpses.

One mile, over a hundred accidents.

“I hope that isn’t like this on every street.” Seamus said.

“I’m afraid it will be. Thankfully there’s our road.” Gabe said, pointing to a section of grass seperated from the road by a sidewalk.

Gabe pulled onto it and headed down the fairway. Apparently he hadn’t been the only one with this idea as there was dozens of tire tracks in the tall grass, and more than a few vehicles dead where they sat.

Following the dog leg around something silver flashed out the passengers side window.

“Hold up!” Seamus said while taking out his flashlight and looking closer. A bag of golf clubs had been strewn across the grass. Attached to one of them was a rotten, mostly skeletal hand with the skin dried and shrunken.

Grabbing at his chest to keep control, Seamus just said, “drive.”
 
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Hey everybody, sorry it took so long to post more but I'm heading out on my Elk trip on Friday. I won't have reliable internet access til Saturday of NEXT week at the earliest. Hope everyone has a happy turkey day!
 
I do hope you get an Elk on your trip.

Wonderful story by the way.

Happy Thanksgiving to you too.
 
Three cheers?

Aussie bloke said:
I Love my freedom and Liberty's,......

My Goverment resents both,....

Liveing under the Heel of a traitor called 'Jack Boot Johny"

I guess you're glad the "traitor" is gone? Now let's see if Rudd follows through with his election promises and does away with that insulting and frivolous, "earth warming" crapoli, and brings your boys home from a war that isn't yours. This is a good time for you all to step up your demands to have personal protection guns legitimized for both home protection and for day to day carry. Push the guy, let's see what he's made of.
 
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