The Mr. Nightcrawler Trilogy: Book I

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OK, so its been a matter of hours. Where's our fix? :D

This latest book is even better than #2. You guys have really gotten polished. Smoother dialogue, transitions, and blending of the two story lines. You guys really rock.

It's like watching Larry Niven and Jerry Pournelle being born! :what:
 
Each chapter is better than the last. The back story on Lorenzo is great. Cant wait to hear what happens next.
 
Be patient, weedhopper.

Nightcrawler has promised an update this weekend.

And as we have seen, when Nightcrawler promises, he delivers.

Or, is that Lorenzo?

Or both?

Stay tuned and find out.
 
I just spoke with Nightcrawler. (the real one, not the fictional one).

He's really sick. He'll get something posted soon, but isn't in any condition to do much right now.
 
I'm alive! Oh look, an update!

11: EXODUS

I stood alone, watching the sun sink towards the horizon. The Nevada sky had turned a fiery red, filled with billowy golden clouds. It was so quiet there that I felt at peace for the first time in what seemed like ages. I don’t know how long I stood there before I heard someone approaching.

“Whattaya say, kid?” Hawk asked, handing me a cold Dr. Pepper.

“Just watching the sunset. It’s so pretty here. So brown, though.”

“Not used to the desert, eh? I grew up not far from here. Little town called Goodsprings. It’s to the northeast aways.”

“Back home it’s all hills, lakes, and trees,” I said, surveying the dusty property behind Hawk’s home.

“Yeah…I love the desert, though. Now what’s eatin’ ya?”

“I got a bad feeling about this next job,” I said, not looking at him. He patted me roughly on the shoulder.

“I know Ramirez gettin’ killed is botherin’ ya too. It happens, kid. All you can do is deal with it.”

“Is it weird? I’ve killed people before. But…he was one of us. It’s not supposed to happen like that.”

“SWITCHBLADE has lost a lot of guys, Hopper,” Hawk said, turning his attention to the horizon as well. “Decker, Aryeh, Doc, an’ me are the only ones left of the original team. Aside from Ramirez, there were five other guys that bought it before we split up last time.”

“When was that?”

“Hell’s bells, kid…ninety-four, I think? You were in elementary school anyway.”

“Sixth or seventh grade, I think.”

“Well thanks kid, I don’t feel like an old fart now,” Hawk said, a rough grin splitting his bearded face. “Here, I got somethin’ for ya.” He handed what looked like an aluminum briefcase.

“What’s this?” I asked, crouching down. I laid the case in the dust and opened it. My eyes grew wide at what I saw.

“Holy ****…” I said, lifting one of the revolvers out of the case. There were two of them. They were both Smith & Wesson Model 629 revolvers, chambered for the .44 Magnum cartridge. One had a five-inch, full underlug barrel, and the other had a three-inch barrel. I stood up with the five-inch gun in my hands, and opened the cylinder. Snapping it shut, I pulled the trigger, and was shocked at how light and smooth the pull was. The cylinder locked up like a bank vault. Tritium night sights faintly glowed in the dusk.

“Hawk…holy ****…I…wow.”

“Replaced a lot of the internals with aftermarket parts, all forged and hand-fitted. Smoothed out the trigger, installed the night sights which, if ya look, are a might better made than the factory ones. Bead blasted both of ‘em. I think those rubber grips ya like ruins ‘em, personally, but it’s yer gun."

“I don’t know what to say,” I said, pointing the big revolver at the horizon and pulling the trigger again.

“Hopper, yer a man after my own heart. Kids these days don’t want to shoot a real gun. They like their little plastic auto-chuckers. You took to a sixgun like I ain’t never seen, kid. Yer good. Ya got talent.” With Hawk’s coaching, I found that I was getting very good with the Colt King Cobra .357 he’d given me. I was about as good a shooter as you’d expect me to be for my level of training, except when I was shooting a double-action revolver. There was just something about them that brought out the best I could do. Corwin and Jeff couldn’t believe how fast I should shoot my ‘obsolete’ revolvers, nor how fast I could reload them. They were shocked the first time I was able to consistently ring the steel target at one hundred yards with a four-inch barreled .357. It just felt natural to me.

“You think we’re gonna be alright, Hawk? Down in South America, I mean.”

“Never can tell, kid. Don’t sweat dyin’. Everybody dies. Sun comes up the next day, wind keeps on blowin’. Sooner or later ya run outta luck, and there ain’t nothin’ ya can do. Just don’t worry about it. Live yer life.”

“I know. It’s just…Ramirez…it was so stupid…it was just a leg wound for Chrissakes.” The bullet had severed Ramirez’ femoral artery; Doc couldn’t stop the bleeding in time.

“**** happens. That’s why it’s important to make the most of it. Ya only get one death, kid. Make it a good one. Now c’mon, we’re gettin’ our picture taken out front. Go grab yer rifle.”

“Is that a good idea?” Hawk laughed.

“Probably not, but what the hell?”
 
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11, Part Two

“…And in other news, authorities are now admitting that the trail of Michael Valentine has gone cold. Valentine is sought for questioning regarding an unprecedented terrorist attack in the dormitories at Northern Michigan University six weeks ago.” The screen switched from the attractive newscaster to a computer generated map of Upper Michigan, highlighting Marquette and NMU. “Authorities believe that this incident is related to a gunfight at a local Wal-Mart store, as well as a massacre of suspected human traffickers a few days later. Valentine is not considered a suspect at this time and he has not been charged with a crime.”

The screen changed again, this time showing the same old stock footage of police cars outside of Spanner Hall. A moment later, Austin appeared on the screen.

“Yeah, there were like six guys, all armed with machine guns. Valentine? Yeah, he lived across the hall from me. One of these guys had a gun on him, so I, you know, I clocked the guy with my bat.”

“How did that make you feel?” the reporter asked.

“It was intense, but you know, these guys came into our dorm and tried to kill everybody. Valentine stopped them. It was crazy, he was like the Terminator or something.” The screen cut back to the newscaster.

“Authorities believe that the dorm attack was in fact an attempt to kill Valentine. What isn’t clear is why a seemingly average student would be targeted in the first place.” The screen cut again to a big, hulking FBI agent, who looked nothing less than awkward in front of a podium.

“Good afternoon. My name is Special Agent Robert Lorenzo. We just want Mr. Valentine to come forward and answer some questions. He is not a suspect at this time, and has not been charged with a crime. We believe his actions in the dorm constitute a clear case of self-defense, regardless of the fact that the guns themselves were illegal for him to have there. We just want to talk to him, and we’re not going to throw him in jail. There are some legal issues regarding him having firearms in the university dorms, but if he comes forward we can find the best solution for everyone involved. At this time we believe that Mr. Valentine was somehow involved with the shooting at the Wal-Mart, and may have information regarding the killings of the suspected human traffickers a few days later. If anyone has any information regarding his whereabouts, please contact your local FBI office. Thank you.” The screen changed again. I laughed at what I saw.

“That can’t be you,” Ling said. I was startled. I hadn’t realized she’d entered the room. The image on the screen was of a scruffy-looking young man, with a shaggy, unkempt goatee, long, uncombed hair, small dark stoner sunglasses, and many piercings in his ears and eyebrows.

“Yep,” I said with a grin, “that’s me. Grew my hair out, didn’t shave for months, got some piercings done. That’s my student ID photo. The one on my driver’s license is about the same. If you can believe it, I went around like that for my first year of school. I felt ridiculous.” Ling looked at me and laughed. I was clean-shaven with my hair cropped in a short military buzzcut, and there was no metal to be found on my face. “They’re going to have a hard time finding me if that’s the only picture they have. And it is the only picture they have, as far as I know. I was very careful to avoid having my picture taken while at school. Even if they do have a more recent picture, so what? I’m just another white guy with short hair.”

The fact that I look so unassuming has often been to my advantage. When people see a guy with glasses and a quiet demeanor, they often make assumptions about him based on that appearance. I look like just another college geek; they don’t often assume that I’m packing a .44.

“Have you considered my offer?” Ling asked, sitting next to me. We were in yet another safe house, this one in northern Iowa, while we planned our next move.

“I have. I still don’t know. It’s not that I don’t agree with what you do, it’s just…I mean…” I fell silent briefly, struggling to find the words to describe what I was feeling. “I don’t want to do this anymore. I’m a murderer,” I said at last.

“So am I,” she said steadily.

“That’s not what I mean. I…”

“Lives are lives, Michael,” she said, cutting me off. “Both of us have ended many of them. Can we really claim to know the heart of each man we kill? Do you really know if he is a good man or a bad one?”

“But EXODUS…”

“…Kills every slaver we catch, yes,” she said, interrupting me again. “Does that sound contradictory? It did to me at first also, but what we do is not just carnage and mayhem. Fear is one of our weapons, Michael. In some places in the world, we’ve succeeded in shutting down the slave trade. There are places where we operate more openly, and in those places, would-be slavers know that invoking our wrath will cost them their lives. It’s the only way to get through to the type of person who would do such a thing. It also serves to protect the victims we free.”

“You really don’t lose any sleep over it, do you?” I asked, turning off the television in front of us.

“I do,” she said, looking at the floor. “I feel guilty for the loss of my subordinates. I feel guilty for those poor souls that we are unable to save. I feel sad that there is such evil in the world that EXODUS is even necessary. But this is a war, Michael, and wars have casualties. Is killing a slaver somehow less moral than killing an enemy soldier? Is bombing an enemy city morally superior to bombing the offices of a human-trafficking ring? As I said, I don’t do it because I relish killing. I do it because it must be done. We are the only hope of countless lost souls held in bondage, who every day pray that someone will save them.

“I have been a slave, Michael. My mother didn’t want me. She was a prostitute in Hong Kong, and I was an unwelcome surprise. My father was one of her clients, I suppose, but I’ll never know. I ran away when I was thirteen, hoping to get to America. I worked hard to save up the money to pay a human trafficker to get me on a ship to Los Angeles. Eventually I had saved up the money, but instead of taking me to America he sold me to a Chinese Triad. Human trafficking made them countless millions of dollars, and I was just one of hundreds that they moved each year. They sold me to a wealthy Arab man in Saudi Arabia when I was fourteen.

“At first, I prayed for rescue. After a few months, though, I abandoned hope, and I prayed for death. I tried to kill myself. I tried to slash my wrists. Each time the Arab would bring in a doctor, and I would be restrained to my bed. When I would recover, he would beat me. If I refused his bed, he would beat me. If I looked out the window, he would beat me. I didn’t leave his house for two years.” Ling’s voice wavered as she told her story, and she didn’t look at me. She absentmindedly played with the remote for the television, and kept her eyes focused on it.

“How did you escape?”

“EXODUS saved me. The Arab took me to a black market auction house. There are many such houses in the Middle East. He was tired of me and was going to sell me for a few thousand dollars. EXODUS raided the house right in the middle of the auction. The Arab was killed, and I was saved. I felt such hatred for him, such anger at the world, that I joined EXODUS to get revenge. But…hatred fades with time, if you let it. I came to see the higher purpose of the organization, and by the time I was assigned to a strike team, it was no longer about me and my petty revenge. It was about saving those who have no hope, and who cannot help themselves.”

Ling looked up at last, offering me a sad smile. I don’t think she was aware that there were tears rolling down her cheeks.

“I’m sorry,” she said. “There are few I’ve told this to. It is not easy for me to say. It brings back a lot of things I try to forget.”

“I understand that, believe me.”

“You are very easy to talk to, Michael,” she said, smiling still. “I am a leader. My subordinates are like my family, yet I cannot confide in them as such. I know they wouldn’t judge me, but I can’t afford to have them worrying about me, either. Yet I’ve known you for not two months and I just told you my life story.” She laughed. “Again, I apologize. Listen to me babbling on like a school girl.”

“It’s cool,” I said, smiling a back at her. “That was my problem in college. I couldn’t talk to anybody. My whole life was a lie, and it was eating me up.”

“So will you join EXODUS?”

“I don’t know. I will finish this fight, though. I’ve got a score to settle with these sons o’ bitches and I’m going to see it through. When are you planning to hit Des Moines?”

“Soon,” she said. “Another strike team will be arriving shortly.”

“Think you could use some more help?”

“Always,” she replied. “What did you have in mind?”

“Lemme borrow your sat-phone,” I said, grinning. “I’m going to get the boys back together.”
 
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11, Part Three

“Hello?” The voice I heard on the other end of the line was one I hadn’t heard in quite some time.

“Yo,” I said, smiling to myself.

“…Mike? Holy ****, what’s going on? You shouldn’t…” Corwin paused. “The chair is against the wall.”

“John has a long moustache,” I replied. Corwin sounded less tense having received confirmation that it was me and that I hadn’t been compromised.

“What’s going on?” he asked at last. “You haven’t contacted me directly in…Christ, I didn’t know you had my number!”

“We’ve got work.”

“What?”

“Yeah dude. I’ve got a job for us.”

“What’s the job?”

“I’ll e-mail you a mission packet. Where are you?”

“Okinawa.”

“What the hell are you doing in Okinawa?”

“There’s a famous Japanese swordmaker here. I’m going to see if he’ll make me a sword.”

“Are you serious? God you are such a geek.”

“Coming from the guy who’s seen every Godzilla movie ever made?” I laughed.

“How fast can you get here?”

“Well that depends. Where are you?”

“Iowa.”

“What the **** are you doing in Iowa?”

“Long story. I need you to fly back to the States, get your stuff, and drive here. The exact location will be in the mission packet.” There was a long pause, and he breathed into the phone a few times.

“Fine,” he said at last. “Gimme a couple days.”

“Thanks dude. It’ll be good to see you again.”

“You too.” He hung up. I laughed to myself, and dialed another number. The phone rang six times before someone answered.

“Hello?”

“’Sup, dude?"I grinned.

Hopper? Dude, seriously, what are you…the chair is against the wall.”

“John has a long moustache. What’s goin’ on?”

“What’s wrong? I saw on the news about you. Are you sure you should be contacting me? Do you need help?”

“Everything’s fine, bro. I just e-mailed you a mission packet.”

“What? I haven’t decoded your e-mail yet. What do you mean, a mission packet?”

“We’ve got work.”

“Seriously?”

“For-real-iously. I need to you come to Iowa.”

“Iowa?”

“Long story, dude, it’s all in the mission packet. Will you come? Matthew’s on his way.”

“What about Hawk?”

“Not with his bum knee. He needs a cane now.”

“I didn’t know it was that bad.”

“I told him he was going to kill himself on that stupid motorcycle.”

“That’s too bad.”

“Will you come?”

“Sure. Just call and screw up my life anytime, Boss. No problem.”

“It’s for a good cause, dude. Read the packet and you’ll see what I mean. See you in a couple of days.”

“Later,” he said, hanging up the phone. I hadn’t been called “Boss” in a long time. I wasn’t sure I liked it.
 
11, Part Four

Everyone arrived a few days later. It was good to see my former teammates again. I also got to meet Ling’s associates. We all gathered in the dining room of the safe house for introductions.

“Michael,” Ling said, “Allow me to introduce Ibrahim, a fellow strike team leader.” Ibrahim stepped forward. He was a tall, muscular man, probably in his early thirties, of obvious Middle Eastern descent. His hair was cropped short, and a thin moustache accented his tanned face. I stuck my hand out and he shook it firmly.

“My name is Michael Valentine,” I said, “and these are my associates, Jeff and Corwin.”

“It is my pleasure,” Ibrahim said. “You will be assisting Ling’s team then?”

“That’s the plan.”

“Very good! Ling, I am sorry to hear of the loss of Alexis. How is Samseer?”

“He’s walking again,” Ling said, sadness suddenly apparent in her eyes. “He has a long road ahead, but the doctors think he will recover. He’ll likely not be able to return to my team, though.”

“Such a tragedy,” Ibrahim said, looking downward. “I will pray for them both.”

“Thank you, my friend,” she said, taking his hand. “How is your team?”

“We are well! You remember Solomon, the young man from Sierra Leone? He has turned into a most effective operative. We are looking forward to working with you.”

“And I you.” I realized then what a tight-knit little community EXODUS was. Ling smiled at her compatriot one last time, then walked to the head of the table. I looked around. Everyone was there. Ibrahim and his five teammates, Dr. Bundt, Michel, Shen, and my own guys, plus a few more people I didn’t recognize.

“Let us begin,” Ling said, turning on an overhead projector. “Good evening everyone. This will be one of our most important, as well as riskiest, missions in recent memory.” She clicked the projector, and a picture of a large farmhouse appeared.

“This is a farm about twenty kilometers outside of Des Moines. Officially it is just one more dairy farm. However, it is owned by one of the most powerful human trafficking firms in North America. They specialize in sex slaves, and most of their victims are children. We estimate there are some thirty to forty such victims being held there. We have a source on the inside that has been feeding us information on their moves. That is how I was able to warn you of the attack on your dormitory, Michael,” she said, addressing me directly before continuing.

“Our source tells us that several clients will be there this Sunday to make their selections. We are going to hit the site then, while the clients are present, and we will try to deal with them and any other targets that present themselves. We cannot allow any of the victims to be taken from there.”

“What about the cops?” Corwin asked. Ling chewed her lip for a moment before responding.

“The trafficking firm in question caters to very wealthy and very influential people. There will undoubtedly be a lot of security on site, but given the nature of their operation I doubt they’ll call the police even in the event of an attack. This will work to our advantage, as having a police response would greatly complicate our getting the victims out of there.”

“Wait, why can’t we just turn them over to the police?” Jeff asked.

“As I said, the clientele of this establishment are very wealthy and very influential. There may even be officials of the American government present. We cannot guarantee the safety of the victims we liberate unless we filter them through the Underground Railroad.”

Ling continued with her briefing. The plan was straightforward. We’d hit just after sundown on the night of the auction. We were most likely going to have a serious fight on our hands, and it was going to get ugly. None of the employees or clients of the trafficking ring were to leave the site alive, if at all possible. I had no doubt that Ling’s teammates would carry out her grim orders without hesitation.

After that, we’d once again split up the victims. We had four large vans at our disposal, and we’d commandeer (steal) other vehicles if necessary. They’d then be taken directly to one of several Underground Railroad stations in the United States. We would split up, with Ling’s team returning to the safe house we were at, and Ibrahim’s team heading for another.

When the briefing was finished, we all gathered in the safe house’s large living room, where I got to witness a ritual that few outsiders ever have. One of the people I didn’t recognize, an older gentleman, walked to the front of the room with a book in his hands. He looked around, nodded, and opened the book. Everyone in the room kneeled, leaving Jeff, Corwin, and myself standing at the back of the room. We looked at each other, and then awkwardly kneeled like everyone else. The man with the book spoke, his voice at once comforting and authoritative.

“Father, who art in Heaven, hallowed by Thy name. As we prepare for battle, we ask that you give to us Your divine guidance. Help us save the innocent and the defenseless from the den of the wicked. Bring justice to those that would break Your laws and enslave their fellow man. Watch over our warriors and let no harm come to them, so that they may continue in their service to you. Forgive us for our sins, for we know the price of the battle ahead. If any of us should fall, we humbly beseech you to take them into Your kingdom, that light may shine on them forever more. Thy kingdom come, thy will be done.”

“Amen,” everyone said in unison. Indeed.

Later that night, Corwin, Jeff, and I sat together in the basement of the safe house. All of the stuff from my storage unit was down there, as well as Corwin’s and Jeff’s gear. We had it all laid out on a wooden work-bench, and were going over what we’d need.

My friends were a mis-matched pair. Corwin was a little shorter than me, stocky and strong, with dark hair and a goatee. Jeff was shorter still, a skinny Chinese-American with a wide, toothy grin. None of us seemed as lean or mean as I recalled; two years of cushy retirement had really taken its toll on us. I smiled, reminding myself to re-adjust my body armor to fit over my paunch.

“This is going to be a serious assault,” I said. “I’m going heavy. Full body armor, load bearing vest, sidearm. I’ll be taking eight mags for my rifle, three speedloaders for my revolver.”

“I can’t believe you still carry that thing,” Jeff said, reassembling his Beretta 92 Elite.

“It’s a good luck charm. You bring your shotgun?”

“Yeah, my carbine too. Not sure which to carry.”

“I’ve got a carbine,” Corwin said, indicating the disassembled M4A1 laying on the work bench.

“Okay, I’ll carry my Benelli, then,” Jeff replied, inserting a magazine into his pistol and chambering a round.

“What the hell are these?” Corwin asked, removing from one of my containers a large object that resembled a rolling pin with one of the handles removed.

“RKG-3s,” I said. “Russian anti-tank grenades.”

“What do you have anti-tank grenades for?” I looked at him incredulously.

“In case there’s a tank.”

“Why would there be a tank?”

“Remember Bolivia?”

“Dude, a BTR-60 is an APC, not a tank,” Jeff said, grinning.

“It might as well be when all you’ve got is a rifle,” I replied with a laugh. ****ing Cubans. “Think fast! Knife check!” I reached into my pocket and retrieved a Benchmade automatic knife. I pushed the button, causing the blade to snap out, and stuck it into the wooden work bench. Corwin and Jeff reciprocated, each producing a switchblade knife of their own and stabbing it into the wood next to mine. We all laughed.

“God damn it’s good to see you guys again. Just like always, if anything happens to me, send my stuff to Hawk.”

“Me too,” Corwin said.

“Yeah, send my stuff to him too,” Jeff replied. Damn, I thought. It’s been almost two years. We’re all supposed to be retired. Yet none of us have really settled down. None of us have any family or any next-of-kin. All we’ve got is each other.

“Okay guys,” I said, a predatory grin splitting my face. “Let’s show these ****ing amateurs how we do it in SWITCHBLADE.”
 
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