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I think we need to represent the music of my half generation....

Think a shot of Lorenzo, NC, Jill, and Reaper walking abreast towards the camera armed to the teeth in dramatic slo-mo while Burn by the Cure plays...you could put that in almost any pre-action scene.

"Just paint your face" the shadows smile
Slipping me away from you
"Oh it doesn't matter how you hide
Find you if we're wanting to
So slide back down and close your eyes
Sleep a while
You must be tired... "
But every night I burn
Every night I call your name
Every night I burn
Every night I fall again
Every night I burn
Scream the animal scream
Every night I burn
Dream the crow black dream
 
I usually like John Williams, James Horner or John Barry (007) with full symphony orchestra for scores, but the doorkicking on Big Eddie and Gordon's gotta be Drowning Pool. I usually hate anything late-'70s or later (some of the music from Top Gun gets an exemption), but that piece is so perfect for that scene, enough so to make even me bite my Hydra-Shok and recommend it...
 
I have a message for NC and Correria:

get.py
 
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I have a message for NC and Correria [sic]:
Would someone be kind enough to tell me what the message is, please. All I see is a red X in a box. Is it my machine or is something wrong with the post?
 
I seeeee nothink! Not even red X's.

Dibs on making the video game. I will include three seperate sound tracks that will be based on the players choice of country, death metal or a combination of the two. And I will get some annoying euro trash in there for the bad guys.

This storyline would be awsome with the bullet time option from max paine. But i'm not sure how the multiplayer versions gonna work yet. But the maps will be bitchen. Maybe team based with terrorists team, dead 6 team and the thieves team. Oooh don't forget the gangs and various "characters" borrowed from the forums. The forum characters can be thier own team by themselves. Of course in this game the 5.56 will be used exclusively by the bad guys to shoot poodles, but hey you need some artistic license.

By the way I can just see the con-girls dressing up in pink waitress dresses, with mp5's.

--mort
 
How does one dress up like a Blues Bear?
It varies a bit but it usually consists of a good pair of western boots.
A qood quality Fedora, Derby or similar fully brimmed felt hat.
A traditional vest.
And an American made electric bass with only four strings and a Hipshot.


On other words, just your average Blues Bear.


There was a photo posted here a few years ago.
 
As far as a sound track goes, you would have to find a place for Warren Zevon, specificly ROLAND THE HEADLESS THOMPSON GUNNER

"Roland was a warrior from the Land of the Midnight Sun
With a Thompson gun for hire, fighting to be done
The deal was made in Denmark on a dark and stormy day
So he set out for Biafra to join the bloody fray

Through sixty-six and seven they fought the Congo war
With their fingers on their triggers, knee deep in gore
For days and nights they battled the Bantu to their knees
They killed to earn their living and to help out the Congolese

Roland the Thompson gunner...

His comrades fought beside him - Van Owen and the rest
But of all the Thompson gunners, Roland was the best
So the CIA decided they wanted Roland dead
That son of a bitch Van Owen blew off Roland's head

Roland the headless Thompson gunner
Norway's bravest son
Time, time, time,
For another peaceful war
But time stands still for Roland
'Till he evens up the score
They can see his headless body stalking through the night
In the muzzle flash of Roland's Thompson gun

Roland searched the continent for the man who'd done him in
He found him in Mombassa in a barroom drinking gin
Roland aimed his Thompson gun - he didn't say a word
But he blew Van Owen's body from there to Johannesburg

Roland the headless Thompson gunner...
The eternal Thompson gunner
Still wandering through the night
now it's ten years later but he still keeps up the fight
In Ireland, in Lebanon, in Palestine and Berkeley
Patty Hearst heard the burst of Roland's Thompson gun...

...and she bought it"
 
“Reaper!” I shouted.

A bullet had smashed his chest plate. He was bleeding badly from the side of his head. I shook him.

He opened his eyes, looked around in confusion, then grimaced. “Ow **** that hurts.” He rolled over and put his hands on his skull. “****** shot me and I hit my ****** head on the ****** car. Quit yelling at me! Oh ****, he shot me in the arm too.” Sure enough there was a nasty wound through his bicep. Jill kneeled by his side and put pressure on it. “**** I hate getting shot!”

“You’ll live,” Jill said.

I could be relieved later. I pulled Reaper’s radio off his vest and yanked out the ear piece plug. “Bob. Can you hear me?”

“Yeah, bro, I’m fine. That guy must have picked up my laser. Pinned me down good.”

Somehow we had all survived. I checked my watch. Less than thirty minutes had passed since I had first crawled through the garage window.

“If you see another car moving down the road. Kill the driver.”

“He’s already around the bend. I don’t have a shot.”

I swore as I keyed the radio again. “Get down to the road as fast as you can. We’ll pick you up in a minute.”

“I’m on my way,” he answered.

I stuffed the radio in my pocket. Nightcrawler had picked up the big PK and taken up a defensive position. I started for the sedan. The door was unlocked. No keys of course. I whipped out my Multitool and cracked open the cover beneath the steering wheel. It took all of thirty seconds to get the car hotwired, and that was between boughts of violent coughing and blood trickling down my arms and making my hands slippery with the stuff. The powerful engine turned over as I struck the wires together.

The others were already cramming into the sedan. Nightcrawler had to maneuver the Russian machine gun to make it fit. The entire prison camp was burning bright now, and we needed to get out of here before the authorities showed up to investigate. I slammed the car into gear and floored it as soon as everyone was inside.

#############

The car was dieing. Something must have been hit as we were unloading on the Fat Man. All of the warning lights were on. The engine was coughing almost as badly as I was. Jill was squished against me, with Bob and his body armor taking up most of the front seat. All of us were filthy, sweating, and some of us were bleeding. Bob’s shocked reaction to seeing me under the car’s interior lights when we had picked him up told me about how horrible I looked.

“We’re almost where we left the vehicles,” Bob stated calmly. He was covered in desert dust and his .308 was between his knees. The fire from the work camp was just a visible glow over the hill behind us.

“The kid’s going to be okay. Bullet clean through the bicep. I’ve got the bleeding under control.,” Nightcrawler said from the backseat.

“I suck at this stuff,” Reaper whined. “I keep getting shot.”

“You get used to it,” Nightcrawler said.

“Bob, I need you to get these guys out of here before the cops show up. Reaper needs medical attention. Think you can handle it?”

“Yeah,” my brother answered. I knew that he was some sort of medic in the National Guard, an 18 Delta he had called it. “But I think you need a hospital.”

“It’s better than it looks,” I lied. There were deep lacerations on my face, scalp, and down my arms. My hands were a blood soaked mess. I had first degree burns on much of my body, and from the throbbing nerves down my back and legs I knew that there were some spots that were much worse. I couldn’t stop coughing.

But there was no way Eddie was going to get away.

The car died as we rolled into the rest stop. I jumped out and started towards the stolen Explorer.

“Where do you think you’re going?” Jill asked.

“After Eddie.” I opened the door. “He told Gordon that he had flown into Quagmire. I can catch him before he takes off.”

“You’re injured. You need medical help,” Jill insisted. She was right of course. I was running on nothing but adrenalin and anger now.

“I’ll be fine,” I said. “I’ll hook up with you later.” I didn’t want them with me. Gordon had probably notified the authorities, and surely word would reach the cops in Quagmire about the massacre at the old work camp. I grabbed the wheel. My vision was blurred and my head was swimming. Bob was helping Reaper into the back of the G-ride Suburban.

Nightcrawler tossed his keys to Jill. “Follow Bob,” he told her. “I went through too much trouble to get that car.”

“Lorenzo…” Jill trailed off. She was filthy, stupid pink outfit splattered with blood, her hair matted with dirt, hanging like a dark shadow over half her face, a stolen handgun dangling at one side.

She was beautiful.

“Yeah, I know,” I rasped.

Nightcrawler opened the passenger side door and slid in, maneuvering the big Russian machine gun to fit between us.

“What are you doing?” I shouted.

“Shut up and drive.” He slammed the door.

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I pushed the Ford up to a hundred and ten. It wouldn’t go any faster. I-15 was only two lanes wide, east bound, through this stretch of desert, and I careened around and between cars and big trucks in a manner that I would normally consider insane. I was a good driver, but I was no Carl, especially in my current condition. I wasn’t worried about being pulled over. Multiple flashing lights and sirens went past us in opposite direction, heading towards the burning prison camp. Apparently word of our gun battle had gotten out, and with at least twenty bodies back there the local cops probably weren’t worried about speeders.

Nightcrawler held onto the overhead strap, or ‘Oh **** Handle’ as Reaper liked to call them. Two semis were side by side on the freeway blocking both lanes, so I took us onto the jittery median, vibrating the hell out of our vehicle, and then back onto the road. He began to look for his seatbelt. The 4x4 was not built for speed and it shook like we were going to fly off of the road and add yet another fireball to the desert. “We probably should have taken my car,” Nightcrawler suggested.

“Yeah, well… didn’t think of it.” We passed a sign. We were only a few miles out of Quagmire. “Why did you come?”

“I didn’t know which way Gordon went,” he shrugged.

“Well… thanks.”

Nightcrawler rolled his eyes. “I’ve already shot like a dozen people tonight, so yeah, you’re welcome.”

“Only a dozen? I thought you were supposed to be some sort of gunslinger,” I responded sarcastically. “At least I shot a poodle.”

“Damn…” Nightcrawler gave a low whistle. “That’s hard core. Bet the little ****** deserved it.”

I tried to laugh, but it turned into coughing. My cell phone vibrated. I pulled it out of my pocket and flipped it open.

“Yeah?”

“Ahh Lorenzo. Just checking. I thought that was you I saw standing on the side of the road back therre. Did I kill any more of your friends with my little drive by?”

“No, Eddie, you’re a sucky shot.” The sound of his voice made me push the gas pedal even harder.

“You certainly are hard to kill.”

“You won’t be,” I promised. “Why did you call?”

He laughed. Somehow his laugh was girly and sadistic at the same time. “To taunt you. My plane is taking off as we speak. I imagine that you are trying to catch up with me, but you will be too late. As soon as I hang up, I’m going to ring one of my associates, and then the fun will begin. I’m not just going to have your loved ones killed, I’m going to have them tortured first. I’m going to take your little nieces and nephews, and I’m going to put them up for sale to the highest bidder. I will—“ I ignored his ranting.

Quagmire. I had to stomp on the brakes to keep from losing it on the off ramp. “Which way is the airport?” I shouted.

“I think it’s that way,” he pointed.

“Hang on.” I cranked the Explorer hard through the stop sign and through the intersection. We were on two wheels for a few seconds.

“No ****,” Nightcrawler said as the PK slid over and struck him. It was early enough in the evening that there were still a few cars on the road. I tore past them and through the center of the sleepy town, dodging back and forth, narrowly avoiding oncoming headlights. People honked. We flew past Jill’s café and the hotel, and the speedometer needle was rapidly climbing again. “I thought you liked to plan stuff out in advance.”

“I’m winging it,” I answered. “Which way?”

“Straight. You pass it on the way to my friend’s house… there… Turn!”

I spotted the chain link fence and smashed the brake, spun us ninety degrees, bounced across a small ditch, hard enough to smash both of our heads into the roof, and then crashed through the fence. We slid through some sand and onto pavement. “There!” Nightcrawler shouted, pointing down the runway. I followed the trail of blue lights. At the end of the runway was a speeding Lear jet, twin engines screaming, building up speed and jumping into the sky. Almost a half a mile away and heading in the wrong direction. “We’re too far.”

Eddie was still going on. “—you hear me? Nobody crosses Big Eddie! Nobody! I’ve got to make an example out of you. I’m going to cut their little fingers off. I’m going to—“

The Explorer skidded to a stop, leaving a trail of rubber. Nightcrawler leapt out, pulling the machine gun with him. He set the barrel over the junction of the door and frame, crouched down, and squeezed the trigger. The PK roared, sending a stream of tracers down the runway and towards the climbing jet. He hosed the rest of the belt, at least a hundred rounds, at the target. Bullets streamed around the jet, but it was just too far away. The PK’s bolt flew forward on an empty chamber. That was it.

“—that’s the best you’ve got, Lorenzo?” Eddie cackled. “Not a scratch on me!” I stuck the phone in the front of my armor.

“****!” Nightcrawler shouted. “He’s getting away.”

“No.” I stated calmly. While he was shooting I had limped around to the back door. I opened it, pulled the concealing blanket aside, and pulled out the portable surface to air missile that I had stolen from the Chechen border jumpers. “He isn’t.”

“Whoa,” Nightcrawler said simply.

I set the heavy tube on my shoulder, took one step around the Explorer and looked through the scope. I had read the instructions earlier, and it seemed relatively straight forward. I found the red and green flashing lights of Eddie’s jet, centered them in the circle, and hit the lock button. It took a few seconds for the sensor to read. It made a noise like a microwave oven saying that the hotdogs were done.

I pulled the heavy trigger.

FOOOOOM

The concussion was horrendous. The rear windows of the Explorer shattered. The initial charge threw the missile straight out. A split second later the rocket engine ignited in a gout of flame and soared after the jet with a shrieking noise like some obscene bird of prey. The impact staggered me. I pulled the phone out of my armor with my shaking left hand.

“—should have just given me the case. I’ll—“

I cut him off. “Hey, Eddie…”

“What, Lorenzo?”

“See you in hell.”

“What are you… Evade! Evade!” He screamed at the pilot.

A fireball blossomed in the night sky. The entire jet was illuminated for a moment as one of the rear engines was engulfed, sparks drifted towards the ground like a demented fireworks display. A secondary explosion took one wing off just as the sound of the first impact reached us. The plane spun laterally, trailing fire, and disappeared into the desert hills. A tower of fire rose from the hillside, illuminating the rising cloud of black smoke. The sound came later. A rumble of thunder.

I looked down at the phone.

Call Disconnected
Elapsed Time: 1:28

It was over.

Big Eddie was dead.

My body began to shake, to tremble. All of the pain that I had forced aside came rushing back, staggering me, sending me to my knees. A year of doing the impossible. My loved ones held hostage. My friends in danger. Some injured. Some killed. All came down to this.

It was over.

“We better get out of here. Cops are probably coming.” Nightcrawler took one look at me, leaning against the Ford, tears cutting through the soot on my face, and said, “Uhh… since you’re spazzing out, I’ll drive.”

I climbed into the passenger seat, eyes closed. The pillar of fire that had been Eddie’s plane burned onto the inside of my eyelids. “It’s over,” I said.

Nightcrawler put the Explorer in gear. “Okay, whatever… hang on, Poodle Killer,” he laughed.

I let the pain carry me into the dark.

…over…
 
[voice=[B]William Conrad[/B]]

Is this really the end of Big Eddie?



But what about Gordon?

Was he on the plane with Eddie or has he once again escaped?

Will be there enough clues to lead Nightcrawler to him?

And what about the reunion clebration?

Will everyone be wearing smiles?

Will Reaper be wearing a cast?

Will Jill be wearing a Poodle Skirt?






I guess you'll have to wait for our next fact filled adventure;






Great Balls Of Fire!

or

Briefcase Full Of Bruise!



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“Hey, Eddie…”

“What, Lorenzo?”

“See you in hell.”
I haven't commented to this point, but dude... I needed a cigarette after that.

And I don't smoke.
 
Is there one place I can down load the whole story?


See post 757 it has most of it
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Thank you very much. :D Wrote that one on my lunch hour.

LaVere, some people are making a word file of this whole thing. They will probably have an updated version up soon.

Seriously, thanks. I'm glad ya'll like it.

Are we done yet? Oh, you'll know when we are done. :)
 
They should have gone to the crash site to make sure he was really dead, and if not, to put one in his head. There's just too much opportunity for him to come back...
 
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