I think we'll just call this one done.
In any case, the premise of this thread is fatally flawed. A thousand people could respond telling the OP what they think of the OP's form, and/or how they would word their own forms. But the only sort of response which could actually be useful would be an opinion from a qualified person who has actually and properly done all the appropriate research.
In any case, the premise of this thread is fatally flawed. A thousand people could respond telling the OP what they think of the OP's form, and/or how they would word their own forms. But the only sort of response which could actually be useful would be an opinion from a qualified person who has actually and properly done all the appropriate research.